That last reviewer was an idiot...
... don't listen to him, man. I loved this piece. Really well-drawn, nice concept, well-executed. Your "how to draw..." cartoon and "Joe Rohd" were very well-done cartoons I enjoyed in the past. Keep up the good work!
Eh...
... your proportions are getting better, but what the heck was that? It was almost set up as a trailer, but too long... I don't know what you were going for, but you didn't get it; this seemed like a summary of everything you've already done, something that could have been said in a paragraph, not requiring an entire animation.
And the sound was hollow and distant... it was like the guy was talking to a wall.
Don't get me wrong, you have potential, but, man... if you're going to spend time on something, make it count.
um, okay
Man...
... this has the potential to be something great, but you really need to work on your graphics and pacing, etc.
Awesome sound effects.
You have the sound nailed solid... it's really tight, and sounds awfully crisp, which is something uncommon here. I don't think the everescence song fit, but everything else was nice.
On the graphics, I think some things are just awesome, and some stuff is kinda out of place (some of the characters, etc)... perhaps polishing them up to fit better with your great scenery and such?
Great job.
Dude...
... this could be about 300kb. Set your audio to "stream" instead of "event", because this was a ridiculously huge file for the ten seconds of stuff you showed.
Ha ha!
That was cute. Well-animated, catchy song, overall great job!
Whoa....
... that last dude was on crack. But that's not the point... looked great!
Nice :)
While it doesn't make sense that this can be your first animation (sure you started it before any other, but you finished other stuff first, making those your first), that's not the point here. There were some very nice camera angles and movements in here. Overall, nicely done... music carries it very well. Good job, better than most of the stuff on here.
Nice...
Ortiz, you never cease to amaze me. I kinda like your flash movies better than this one, though.
I like!
Something different... funny... well-drawn, smooth... great overall!
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Joined on 1/16/02
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